About the room
Who lives there
1 female, professional, non smokers
Ideal flatmates
Everyone welcome
Room description
Yes. There are a few places where you’re saying the same thing twice (e.g. “studio-style”, “feels like your own apartment”, “feels like your own place”). You can trim around 20–25% without losing any important information.
Here’s what I’d tighten:
* Remove repeated mentions that it “feels like your own place.”
* Combine the bills/cleaner paragraph.
* Shorten the “About Me” section.
* Simplify the location bullets.
* Remove unnecessary explanatory sentences.
A tighter version would look like this:
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Studio-Style Room in a Beautiful 1,100 sq ft Flat | London Bridge | 12 July – 13 September
If you’re looking for somewhere that feels more like your own apartment than a room in a house share, this could be the perfect fit.
Available 12 July – 13 September, this huge studio-style room occupies its own area of the 1,100 sq ft flat, giving you multiple private spaces and plenty of room to yourself.
Your Space<<<
* Huge double bedroom
* Private living room/lounge with sofa
* Dedicated work-from-home office (desk arriving this week!)
* Direct balcony access from your room
* Plenty of storage
* Fully furnished
The Flat<<<
* Spacious 1,100 sq ft apartment
* Shared with just me
* Large kitchen
* Bathroom with bath & shower
* Cleaner included
* All bills included, plus towels, bedding, toilet paper and coffee pods if needed – you can move in with just a suitcase!
I’ll also be away for multiple stretches over the summer, so you’ll have the flat to yourself for a good portion of your stay.
Location<<<
* Zone 1 – 9-minute walk to London Bridge
* 30 seconds from Maltby Street Market
* Just off Bermondsey Street
* 1 minute from Tanner Street tennis courts
* Close to Borough Market, the City and excellent transport links
* Two shops within a 5-minute walk
About Me<<<
I’m Amelia, a strategist at Tripadvisor. I’m clean, tidy, easy-going and respectful of personal space. I work from the office 3–5 days a week and am often out with work, travel or social plans. Happy to share the occasional dinner or drink, but equally happy to give you your own space.
House Rules / Important Info<<<
* No smoking inside the flat
* Smoking is welcome on the balcony with the door fully closed; vaping is fine in your room
* Right to Rent check required
* £500 deposit (stays up to 1 month)
* £1,000 deposit (stays over 1 month)
Rent<<<
£2,100/month (one-month stay)
£2,000/month (full-duration booking)
All bills included
Council Tax Band E (included)
Who This Is For<<<
Ideal for someone looking for a high-quality, central London base for the summer.
* Pet friendly (happy to discuss)
* Couple friendly (happy to discuss as the arrangement may vary slightly)
If it sounds like a good fit, send me a message with a bit about yourself and what you’re looking for. Happy to arrange a call or viewing, and hoping to move quickly!